Odessa Steps

Eye and Me

By: Charles Giuliano - Feb 09, 2016

Odessa Steps

Protocol
Two plus weeks
In bed
Face down or side
Retina reattached
No reading or TV
Keith Richards
Read by Johnny Depp
Saved my ass
The Rolling Stoned
Mick the Prick
All day NPR
News and more news
Utter bore
Melancholy
Incremental tedium
Enduring days
Now fifteen
Gas bubble
Slowly shrinking
Evoking
Odessa Steps
Eisenstein's
Potemkin
White Russians
Slaughtering rebels
Baby carriage
Caroming down
Old woman
With glasses
Shattered
Screaming
Shards in eyes
Enduring
Ordeal
All too
Real

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Reader Comments

"Steady on my friend.! The rainbow you're seeking to enjoy is just a few days from now. Hang in there Charles. We're all pulling for you to complete the full rehab and then get back in the saddle, riding off into that Rainbow that you will now see, once again, clear as a bell once. Thanks for the update. Jack"

Posted By: Jack Lyons on 02-09-2016, 08:41 pm
"Nice to see poetry reattached. Strong work, shards in eyes sufficiently awful. This gets the course."

Posted By: Stephen Rifkin on 02-09-2016, 07:21 pm
"Aw Charles I'm so sorry you have to put up with this. Please get well soon. I expect kind Astrid is helping you to write on regardless. Still hanging in there. Better soon."

Posted By: Elizabeth Pratt on 02-09-2016, 05:09 pm
"No Reading =Impossible! Keep hangin' in Charles-"

Posted By: Linda on 02-09-2016, 03:59 pm
"You're back!"

Posted By: Jane Hudson on 02-09-2016, 03:36 pm